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oh daddy now a man
by Kalikala Smithyou are supposed to be the one
that i can rely on
that i can cry to
that i can talk to.
and yet you are the one
that i have to run away from
that i have to cry about
that i have to talk about.
daddy why have you left me?
joined the path of apathy
where depression breeds depression
breeds heartache and inner turmoil.
random man you are gone from me.
i've joined the path of far away from you
where depression breeds hate
breeds heartache and inner turmoil.
like father, like daughter. 03/28/2004 Posted on 03/28/2004
Copyright © 2025 Kalikala Smith
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 03/28/04 at 11:19 PM Hard revelation to have. You transcribe it well here. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/29/04 at 01:57 PM 'where depression breeds depression' and 'where depression breeds hate, two different inner worlds but the charge is the same.Emotionally negative.The end result is the same -'heartache and inner turmoil.'Like father like daughter. Alike.
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| Posted by Christel Crews on 03/30/04 at 03:01 AM wow- this is a sad piece b/c the revelation is sad yet freeing at the same time... i don't know if i'm making sense... |
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