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Dear God

by Traci Mabats

I hope vainly
in my heart
that all I run
from
will eventually
lead to you

03/22/2004

Posted on 03/22/2004
Copyright © 2025 Traci Mabats

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 03/22/04 at 10:08 PM

*sigh* what a beautiful sentiment for the one you wait for..i simply love this!

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/23/04 at 04:03 AM

this is so simple and beautiful...well put...

Posted by Jean Mollett on 03/23/04 at 04:18 AM

Hi Sharona, Beauitful, don't be afraid to reach out to him. He's always around.

Posted by Rula Shin on 03/26/04 at 05:57 PM

So much is said here with such eloquent simplicity. The speaker's conflict is apparent as to 'run away' is usually not to reach the 'final destination'. Your plea is emotional and heartfelt and sad. It raises the question, 'if one stops running will one find that hope is not in vain? I really enjoyed this :-)

Posted by Wendy Geal on 08/17/04 at 07:14 PM

amazing message for such few words.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 12/17/09 at 02:07 AM

thank you thank you thank you.
this is my new favorite conversation with God.

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