| Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 01/23/07 at 03:45 AM This was fun. I don't know you personally, but you painted yourself as a very charismatic fellow, to whom I related to throughout the piece. The only thing I'd critique is your tendency to hold back. I feel like there are some missed opportunities, in terms of what could be exposed (you've probably heard the saying, "show, don't tell"... which is basically what I mean). Although, keep in mind, I'm a very visual person, so perhaps it's best to ignore me altogether. Good show, overall. |