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Cellophane

by Ginette T Belle

Red pepper sunlight
Baking the sense out of me
need blue sanity

03/18/2004

Posted on 03/19/2004
Copyright © 2024 Ginette T Belle

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/20/04 at 05:36 PM

I really liked this poem, "baking the sense out of me" thats a clever line. I also like the color contrast between the red hot pepper and the cooling quality of Blue. Tho a little insanity can be fun hehe

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 03/21/04 at 03:20 PM

This is scenic smarts. I revelation somewhat. I think this is a favorite.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/23/04 at 01:51 PM

The contrast is the neutralizing factor.Blue neutralizes the red.

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