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In So Deeply (Dirtygurl Remix)
by Quinlan L GibsonGet it on and go right to me, in so deeply and right through please
slip it in and then unscrew, now lift me up and try like this.
My lips quiver, you deliver a sweet storm, inside I shiver
like it best if I can have one as we kiss.
Press me down and push me on you; Ill find something to hold on to
Pull me close and then begin to make me feel it all within
dont be surprised if at the end I say again.
It gets creamy, in between, and we become a porno scene.
Better than could ever dream; after 3 years it still seems as if the first.
Quench my thirst and douse my flame, listen as I call your name
wanting only you to tame that burn inside me.
I will never want another, to be my wanton lover
You are more than any other and I keep you in so deeply.
03/18/2004 Author's Note: hehe :)The original clean, mushy version is in the "patheticly mushy" file, and it deserved it's remix...
Posted on 03/18/2004
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/18/04 at 11:27 PM This is Hot, and the last two lines make it even hotter. The fact that you love your partner of three years and still go on like this, its amazing. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 03/19/04 at 03:10 PM Wow! Sizzlin' Babe. I'm with Kara on this one - all this still after 3 years?! - NICE! :-) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 03/20/04 at 04:39 PM WOW Quin..you go girl!! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/20/04 at 04:40 PM Yes, its deep. Beyond body. |
| Posted by Mahassine Mir on 09/13/04 at 01:58 PM Great poem!
I would have preferred if you stopped at the "It gets creamy, in between, and we become a porno scene." cause after that you're putting love and faithfulness in the poem and I think it's beauty lies in the animal power of sex. |
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