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SworeToDream+You'reHauntingMe

by J. P. Davies


Could you blame me,
if your slap-dash fire
turns out to be a joker?
Or if your spinning incisions
cut just a bit too deep to bleed?

So in californian sunrises,
your skin could glow
marmalade orange,
and nights could never converse
with the waking hours.

If the time comes to equate this
with a furor of gesticulations,
then your motions would cease
to create the illusion of elation.

{It could all be arranged in rows
and columns; for the single purpose
of you finding your way home.}

03/17/2004

Posted on 03/18/2004
Copyright © 2024 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 03/18/04 at 06:35 PM

I like this, and the way you've formatted it with the colours. Way to try something new out :)

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/19/04 at 04:31 AM

i LOVE the second stanza, beautiful wording...great poem..

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/19/04 at 10:22 PM

I love the splashes of color, and to agree with Ryan, that condescending last stanza is perfect. HAHA

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/23/08 at 03:06 PM

that second stanza is a killer. sunrises and marmalade...

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