|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Alex Smyth on 03/16/04 at 03:03 PM|
Made me laugh right out loud. Then I thought, "Hey, that is sorta profound..." (Something about that form just demands respect:o)
|Posted by Betania Tesch on 03/18/04 at 05:54 AM|
you make me shiver with honesty and unstrip the accoutrements of reality into a pureness that is almost absurd...but not laughable.
|Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/18/04 at 10:54 PM|
The only time I have eveer noticed a ceiling is when im ummm....Nice Poem.
|Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/19/04 at 04:23 AM|
cute, very cute...
|Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/15/04 at 07:32 PM|
Well they do say that people explore the simplistic bits of life in haikus, and that's a simplistic I think as one can get.
|Posted by JD Clay on 05/08/04 at 05:26 PM|
Now there's a haiku that'll really hold your syrup. Catchey poem, Allan.
|Posted by Paul Lastovica on 05/31/07 at 03:28 PM|
my ceiling appears to have goosebumps.