Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Alex Smyth on 03/16/04 at 03:03 PM Made me laugh right out loud. Then I thought, "Hey, that is sorta profound..." (Something about that form just demands respect:o) |
Posted by Betania Tesch on 03/18/04 at 05:54 AM you make me shiver with honesty and unstrip the accoutrements of reality into a pureness that is almost absurd...but not laughable. |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/18/04 at 10:54 PM The only time I have eveer noticed a ceiling is when im ummm....Nice Poem. |
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/19/04 at 04:23 AM cute, very cute... |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/15/04 at 07:32 PM Well they do say that people explore the simplistic bits of life in haikus, and that's a simplistic I think as one can get. |
Posted by JD Clay on 05/08/04 at 05:26 PM Now there's a haiku that'll really hold your syrup. Catchey poem, Allan.
Pe4ce... |
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 05/31/07 at 03:28 PM my ceiling appears to have goosebumps. |