| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/14/04 at 09:31 AM very accurate portryal of lust... in a tiny little package... blessings... |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 03/15/04 at 09:54 PM concise... captured... wow. There it is in three small lines. Incredible. |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/09/04 at 08:18 PM Oh boy! And I htough it was us women who were cursed by biology! (A neat seyru/'ku) |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/08/06 at 01:17 PM hehehe brilliant, "you have to come second" screamed at me. |
| Posted by Megan Langley on 05/19/08 at 02:49 PM somehow I had never read this one... I like it! :) "biology's curse"--so true |
