|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/14/04 at 09:31 AM|
very accurate portryal of lust... in a tiny little package... blessings...
|Posted by Mara Meade on 03/15/04 at 09:54 PM|
concise... captured... wow. There it is in three small lines. Incredible.
|Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/09/04 at 08:18 PM|
Oh boy! And I htough it was us women who were cursed by biology! (A neat seyru/'ku)
|Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 12/08/06 at 01:17 PM|
hehehe brilliant, "you have to come second" screamed at me.
|Posted by Megan Langley on 05/19/08 at 02:49 PM|
somehow I had never read this one... I like it! :) "biology's curse"--so true