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dismisal

by Kalikala Smith

are we all spawns of dawn's creation?
when the morning sun comes crashing inflation?
are we all a signature reaping the benefits
of Satan's rewards in the sour Memphis?
so sell salads sally silly sell salads so

this is the way we all want to go.

03/13/2004

Posted on 03/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Matt Forget on 03/13/04 at 04:56 PM

Very enjoyable! I love the second to last line of the S's beautiful rhythm and excellent imagery. Keep up the great work! :)

Posted by Tim D Livingston on 03/15/04 at 11:10 PM

sweet rhymes and alliteration! You'll have to put this in a song right.

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