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In So Deeply
by Quinlan L GibsonWhat was that look: that one that took my breath away?
The one that said things you sometimes say; the one that makes everything okay.
I saw it twice tonight and it felt just like IÂ’d imagined it to be.
That way you look at me makes it all sugar coated; so devoted
I feel you finally are; wished upon that star and you came true.
What do I do with this much satisfaction, my reaction still unclear
IÂ’m not used to no confusion as to if you are for real.
I steal moments all the time, have only your face in my mind
you captivate me with the promises that have come true.
I am with you so completely, by your side and in so deeply
that I donÂ’t know what will happen and for once I do not care.
You are there.
03/12/2004 Author's Note: still mushy...
Posted on 03/13/2004
Copyright © 2025 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/13/04 at 06:35 PM Pathetically mushy, hehe. I love this, it is so sweet and loving. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/16/04 at 03:39 AM it flows soooo nicely...i loved reading it... |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 03/16/04 at 10:36 PM quin*
i really love the way you play with rhymes. it's like a sonnet on acid. lol. it's really mushy. it's really beautiful. yay! *nanette |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 03/17/04 at 07:11 PM I like this poem about living in the moment. - "that I don’t know what will happen and for once I do not care. You are there." - very mushy. Also very stable.
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| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/16/04 at 04:46 PM Mushy but in a good and sweet way |
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