Closing Eyes: A free ticket out. by Deanna M Gritsonis
Heres a little story of a girl
Filled with the rage of the world
Something you couldnt tell sometimes
She tries to hide
Of the chains that are invisible to anyone but her
That hold her to her place
To keep her stuck
And if anyone knew her secret she is sure they couldnt look her in eye
Of the times where she couldnt hold it in and began to cry.
For her mind would travel threw books and out windows and deep inside
She would go places she couldnt alive
So she closed her eyes and drifted away to places she longed to see
To the green fields
to temples
.to the clouds
to the center of the Earth and back.
To dance on stars
to a real cowboy bar
to the culture of lands she had only read about.
And no matter who could hold her or kiss her or love her it wasnt enough she wanted the beauty of the world to touch.
And even in a room filled with friends, she sat alone inside her head
wanting more to see and do then this.
Then the girl got older and more wise
But still she traveled in her mind, waiting for the days when she could leave and find all the places and things, that made her eyes wide with wonder and passion
for she knew it was a matter of time when she could pack her bags and not look behind.
03/09/2004 Author's Note: A glass of wine and pack of smokes... my time to feel and emotions evoked.
Posted on 03/10/2004 Copyright © 2025 Deanna M Gritsonis
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/14/04 at 10:45 PM I loved this poem and I can totally relate to the feeling of restlessness...if only I had the means to travel the world... |
Posted by Jared Winkler on 03/25/04 at 10:08 PM You are so damn complex... excellent work... you know yourself well. |
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