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Arrhythmia

by Leslie Ann Eisenberg

putrid layers of
viscous jersey exhaust
sizzle and settle on sill and stucco
of our gray apartment house on Route One

eight lost heartbeats
syncopate behind five doors
in a co-dependent metronome of
shrieking caged birds,
army green dumpster lid crash,
frozen dinners,
cat shit,
Zoloft,
abortions

I rattle as much as the worn floorboards to the
clomp of fat Joe
heaving three hundred pounds up the steps,
pump quake of speeding semis,
angry feet stomping past to slam the door

There was a lost island summer once
adagio sunsets but a dream long spent,
Now I sit on a threadbare, hand me down couch,
Listen to his goddamn Mahler records,
Eat six pieces of marmalade toast and pay his bills

but beneath the planks there is
Peart-pulse,
strawberry locks, save the whales, and malboro lights

knock, knock

03/08/2004

Author's Note:
"--You move me

---You move me"

Posted on 03/09/2004
Copyright © 2024 Leslie Ann Eisenberg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 03/09/04 at 08:38 PM

Frustrated violent blast of images that smack into the reader's consciousness with repetitive impacts. Though the tone is one of frustration and darkness, there seems to be a splash of hope at the end. Great read that wakes you up! :)

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 03/10/04 at 04:42 AM

Max and Joe pretty much summed up my feelings on this one. Might I add "Movie, movie, film noir"!

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/13/04 at 03:52 AM

desolate and destitute... this smacks of a life undeserved and unwanted... damn good portrayal and damn good writing... blessings...

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/05/04 at 05:04 PM

this is one of my favorites from you. your tone and style are really evolving.

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