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Sit tight & dont you worry. winter will be over with soon enough

by Jolie Jordan

The ground is layed perfect
like your flesh to my arms

but the sky remains paled,
as I slur a plea to the stars
and the snow that swishes
carried from roof to wind,

as pieces of white carefully line the branches
protruding like bones from the skeleton of an oak tree,

I'm finding it hard to believe how beautiful everything is tonight

(and how,
it would be so much prettier
if you were tucked away in a body bag.)

03/07/2004

Posted on 03/07/2004
Copyright © 2025 Jolie Jordan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 03/07/04 at 06:31 PM

as I slur a plea to the stars....wow. now, this ending, made me think of burying someone in a lake, beneath the ice, and no one finds their body until spring. like nicole kidman, who gets her due in "to die for"

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