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You're so pretty
by Sam RobertsI love staring at you when youre not aware,
Those black bags under each lifeless eye,
You pull it off well.
Every part of you is simply faint
There is nothing of you, I can say in doubt
Those black rings under each lifeless eye
Is just another part of you, that I love
03/01/2004 Author's Note: i can't write love poems, it shows
Posted on 03/01/2004
Copyright © 2024 Sam Roberts
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 03/02/04 at 10:10 PM really sweet and tender. i am glad you posted it- |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/04/04 at 02:04 PM Its a beautiful love poem.'There is nothing of you, I can say in doubt' what more do you want to say? You said it so assertively.
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