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Heat Lightning

by Leslie Ann Eisenberg

I look at myself
in the soda fountain mirror

Why did you follow him here?
I shout at the glass

Black flecks strike back

Snakes of light streaks
are woven into clasping hands
and I forget the words to the song,
even though they wall my heart

And I come with the fury of 10,000 beast hooves spooked by a storm

02/18/2004

Author's Note: "Warm winds blowin', heatin' blue skies..."

Posted on 02/28/2004
Copyright © 2025 Leslie Ann Eisenberg

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashley Beaudoin on 02/29/04 at 03:47 AM

A wonderful piece. I love watching heat lightning.

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 02/29/04 at 07:45 AM

The mirror, the hands formed by lightening, and then the last line...WOW, Leslie!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/29/04 at 04:22 PM

External affecting within. It does. Beautiful imagery.

Posted by Beth K Hannah on 03/01/04 at 04:38 AM

such wonderful imagery. I have just discovered your work and already enjoy it.

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