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I'm Lost

by Thomas K. Hunt

Once was a time in the deep
Surrounded by warmth
Under a shroud of comfort
Below the grade of harm
Life was complete

Now, on the surface
I'm lost

02/28/2004

Posted on 02/28/2004
Copyright © 2024 Thomas K. Hunt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 02/28/04 at 10:28 PM

Below the grade of harm nice line. spare, yet effective imagery

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/29/04 at 02:17 PM

Yes, back on the suface, a situation of not of our choice but coinciding circumstances. I can easily identify with this.

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