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by Olivia Weinkein

you are filthy
and i love you
dirt & all
you silly scoundrel
i would sell myself
over and over again
just to be closer to
you just
to be dirty
with you
i would sell myself i
am telling you i would
i would sell
myself i would
even
sell you.

02/26/2004

Posted on 02/27/2004
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rula Shin on 02/27/04 at 03:50 AM

I love the title! And the flow, "i love you dirt & all...you silly scoundrel" - haha I love this, very playful! To go as far as selling yourself to "be dirty with you" is so romantic somehow in this raw context...I'm not sure I understand the last two lines though, "i would even sell you."? - Great read :-)

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