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Winter Rain

by Cole Miller

Its the middle of February
Supposed to be one of the coldest
Times of this Minnesotan year
But today I looked out and saw
Snow melting puddles forming
And rain falling from the sky.

Your plane left yesterday
But I think the sky just found out
Because when I looked outside
I caught the sky crying for you
Trying to cover it up with clouds.

You've only been gone for a day
But I miss you already and
I think someone told the sky
Because when I felt like crying
The sky was right there with me
Crying through its winter rain.

02/19/2004

Author's Note: not quite what i wanted. but. i miss him. rar.

Posted on 02/20/2004
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/20/04 at 08:30 PM

love the image in the second stanza

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 02/20/04 at 09:12 PM

Aw Cole, it rained for 2 days when my man went on vacation in 2002. I feel each sentiment in this piece personally..i loved it.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/22/04 at 10:02 PM

Nice tender poem Cole...Charlie

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