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Truck Ride

Fatigue and sorrow
Sleep steals in like a hangman
Heads at odd angles

02/19/2004

Author's Note: Thought of this today as my buddies and I were riding back to camp in the back of an LMTV (2.5 ton military truck).

Posted on 02/19/2004
Copyright © 2025 Jon-Jacob F Deal

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 02/21/04 at 02:28 PM

wow. great imagery for having only used so few words.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/21/04 at 02:36 PM

sounds like a very uncomfy ride. nice little verse:)

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/17/04 at 02:49 PM

LOL Poor soldiers, they fall asleep anywhere dont they?

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