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You Live, You Love, You Learn, You Reload (triple haiku)
by Jon-Jacob F DealIf you love someone
They say you should set them free
I have my own take
If you love someone
Set them free and then shoot them
If they live, they're yours
If not, no big loss
They were leaving anyway
And the border's close 02/14/2004
Author's Note: Happy Valentine's Day 2004!
Posted on 02/13/2004
Copyright © 2025 Jon-Jacob F Deal
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/14/04 at 03:49 PM I love haiku especially quirky ones, this was great! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/19/04 at 11:40 AM ouch...great haiku though |
| Posted by Brett Shane on 06/07/05 at 06:13 AM hahahahahah.... no big loss... def. a fave set of haikus. |
| Posted by Deborah Breuer on 08/30/06 at 10:58 PM I find this comically appropriate for the dreaded V-day. If you don't mind the suggestion...you may find my work, "No Body, No Murder" pleasing and equally something...I'm not sure what. As for your work, very clever and enjoyable...over and over (I suppose that could sound morbid). |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 01/06/12 at 06:06 PM Blatant and funny! |
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