to J by Richard Trotterthough we are strangers,
I'd roll the dice for you
count the freckles on your face
and photograph your smile. 02/13/2004 Posted on 02/13/2004 Copyright © 2025 Richard Trotter
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Sam Roberts on 02/14/04 at 01:36 PM awww, like I've said before..I hope it all works out for you and Jackie. Sweet poem Rich xx |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/18/04 at 12:59 AM lighthearted and cute, good job ;-) |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/18/04 at 10:14 AM Well, you did photograph. The freckles on your face reflect those frecles. Its a sweet little piece which speaks of your emotions and the charge, so refined, so beautiful. |
Posted by Stephanie Kent on 02/20/04 at 01:23 AM I love "count the freckles on your face"...there is something so sweet about that. |
Posted by Kalikala Smith on 02/25/04 at 02:13 PM short and sweet... i really like the captured sentiment:) |
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