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by Richard Trotter

though we are strangers,
I'd roll the dice for you
count the freckles on your face
and photograph your smile.

02/13/2004

Posted on 02/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 Richard Trotter

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sam Roberts on 02/14/04 at 01:36 PM

awww, like I've said before..I hope it all works out for you and Jackie. Sweet poem Rich xx

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/18/04 at 12:59 AM

lighthearted and cute, good job ;-)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/18/04 at 10:14 AM

Well, you did photograph. The freckles on your face reflect those frecles. Its a sweet little piece which speaks of your emotions and the charge, so refined, so beautiful.

Posted by Stephanie Kent on 02/20/04 at 01:23 AM

I love "count the freckles on your face"...there is something so sweet about that.

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 02/25/04 at 02:13 PM

short and sweet... i really like the captured sentiment:)

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