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(Yes{A Million Times}Yes)

by J. P. Davies

Tear-stained cheeks,
and a hopeful smile.
She looks up, through her hands.
And asks the question, she fears.
"Do you think I'm beautiful?"
(Yes{A Million Times}Yes)

02/12/2004

Author's Note: This thought just sprang into my head, so I had to write it down...

Posted on 02/12/2004
Copyright © 2024 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 02/13/04 at 01:48 AM

I think this is brilliant. The idea is striking. It's common place (sadly), and yet you managed to make it seem very deep.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 02/26/04 at 11:10 PM

So incredibly sweet. It makes me wish someone wrote it for me ;)

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