(Yes{A Million Times}Yes) by J. P. DaviesTear-stained cheeks,
and a hopeful smile.
She looks up, through her hands.
And asks the question, she fears.
"Do you think I'm beautiful?"
(Yes{A Million Times}Yes) 02/12/2004 Author's Note: This thought just sprang into my head, so I had to write it down...
Posted on 02/12/2004 Copyright © 2025 J. P. Davies
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 02/13/04 at 01:48 AM I think this is brilliant. The idea is striking. It's common place (sadly), and yet you managed to make it seem very deep. |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 02/26/04 at 11:10 PM So incredibly sweet. It makes me wish someone wrote it for me ;) |
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