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I Was..

by Charles J Hannan

Forgotten
Left in the corner
In between boxes and dust
Where did he go?
All covered in dirt
And hurt
I hurt
Knowing the truth
I was Forgotten

02/12/2004

Posted on 02/12/2004
Copyright © 2025 Charles J Hannan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/12/04 at 08:02 AM

the pain in this one is so present *hugs*

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 02/12/04 at 08:46 PM

yes, in its concise and honest, frank form, it is very touching and vivid. A terrible feeling, to feel that.

Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 02/13/04 at 04:32 AM

This one has power in its simplicity.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 02/14/04 at 04:57 PM

lol happy valentine's day *hugs* great job...i feel the pain in this powerful poem

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