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!! dead noise in her sulfurwomb

by Jolie Jordan

I'm hanging your tendrils from my fists
but I remember your mouth in fluent form
and if you'll only place your hands
on my static cling waist
I'll make sure to show you
why they call me the killer

fling back your bloody flesh darling
you're not even the victim here.

02/10/2004

Author's Note: I thought about you when I wrote this.

Posted on 02/10/2004
Copyright © 2024 Jolie Jordan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 02/13/04 at 06:56 PM

this is really good..like an anthmen i love hate poetry its my speciality lol

Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 07/27/08 at 03:56 AM

omg. this is rock solid. can't believe i haven't read this before. i am lost in your library tonight :)

Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 07/27/08 at 03:57 AM

i even love the matter-of-fact attitude in your author's note. perfect.

Posted by Timothy Burns on 09/23/09 at 03:56 PM

the title pulled me in. and then the poem pulled me in even more. The first line just slayed me! +fave

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