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it all breaks loose when they learn their cow is made of gold

by Melinda Sordino

high into justified kingdoms
live many nomadic,
opressed people
quilting resolutions,
simultaneously tumbling
under violent waterfalls.

xenophilic youth
zelously arrive,
bringing caustic doom:

examine false gods.

02/10/2004

Posted on 02/10/2004
Copyright © 2024 Melinda Sordino

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kimberly Bare on 02/10/04 at 08:52 PM

very good! These things are definitely addictive...i agree! This one is so well-done, though, that i am hopeful you keep it up...

Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 07/14/04 at 04:13 PM

excitingly apocolyptic. thanks, melinda. nice work. well done.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/30/06 at 12:22 AM

Enjoyed this, thanks for the read!

Posted by Paganini Jones on 07/13/07 at 06:29 AM

It is so difficult to make these work as poetry and logically, but this poem pulls it off beautifully.

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