by Holly H Dunne

Broken mind, broken heart
A broken soul that's ripped apart
Broken friendships, broken trust
Broken memories begin to rust
Broken promises, broken thoughts
Broken bonds for which I've fought
I am living a nightmare and I can't be woken
No one can fix me, I will always be broken


Author's Note: total despair...

Posted on 02/09/2004
Copyright © 2021 Holly H Dunne

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Phineas on 03/21/05 at 03:59 AM

Brilliant!!! Sometimes poets overuse a word in their poem in an attempt to highlight a point, but it just makes for a dull read. However, your usage of "broken" fits perfectly!!!

Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 05/19/08 at 10:37 PM

Boy does this stir up the ashes again. Thanks for the write. It was indeed memorable.

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