It's Turned Cold (Haiku)

by Thomas K. Hunt

Cold are the moments
The moments are here to stay
Frozen is your heart


Posted on 02/07/2004
Copyright © 2024 Thomas K. Hunt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/07/04 at 08:02 PM

this is biting and raw... insightful take on those that would be so cold towards us... excellent... blessings...

Posted by Sam Roberts on 02/07/04 at 08:07 PM

true.. beautiful x

Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/07/04 at 09:58 PM

biting one!

Posted by Rula Shin on 02/12/04 at 07:40 AM

Wow, I really like this. Each line is an icy chill...the bitter moment, it's endless presence, the cold heart that will not cease to produce these moments. I love these transitions. Beautiful :-)

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