just remembering

by Ginette T Belle

in the midst of
this mild winter evening
slush tipped shoes
he walks - mind out of focus
drinking liquid power from a paper cup
black electric wire
to connect to seeded empires
i've tried many times
but some unwanted beauty
can never, ever be forgotten


Posted on 02/04/2004
Copyright © 2020 Ginette T Belle

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David Neubauer on 02/04/04 at 02:01 PM

This has a great flowing power to it much like the coffee I figure the guy is drinking... Wonderfully done...

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/09/04 at 02:08 AM

this put a story in my mind... brilliant little piece here... blessings...

Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 02/19/04 at 03:28 AM

this creates such a vivid image- great piece

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