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(Bloodshot & Beautiful)

by Trisha De Gracia

Beating through the cold fluidity of midnight twilight
paperwire flying beautifuls can do their best to break the sound
but all you do is slither like a coil through my marrows
turning all my blood to silver with this crumplecrumpleshakedissolve
and casting bits of glimmer 'tween the swimming plasma seas.

Dissolved into my bloodways
I hear music dreaming decades far away into the future
but the decades, blinking, dream only of past results and pretty girls
and now they float into a sea of cluttered platelets
(tracing elements you wrung in chromey coloured arteries).



It scatters up my vertabrae,
jars and jumps each threadnerve's jolt-

electric signals foaming at the mouth
and fiending like a mesh of lacey addicts
bend to take another dip into
your sweet-aesthetic vinegar.
[Make no mistake]
[it burns as it slides down]

01/29/2004

Author's Note: I struggled with the title for this. At one point it was gonna be Alice, Oh Alice (which is relevent to me) but this might make more sense (I hope).

Posted on 01/30/2004
Copyright © 2024 Trisha De Gracia

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Barbara Griffith on 01/30/04 at 08:16 PM

Wow!! I especialy was rocked by the lie "Dissolved into my bloodways/I hear music dreaming decades far away into the future" That is so amazing... Does this and the first idea of the poem have anything to do with "aLice'S wonDerland"?

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