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::hearing your heart::
by Bethany Lee
silent,
save for a single
swiftsound heartbeat
you were singing a solitary
supersonic song...
safely snug inside of me.
01/26/2004 Posted on 01/28/2004
Copyright © 2024 Bethany Lee
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/01/04 at 07:58 PM Your superb alliteration in the line 'you were singing a solitary supersonic song...' truly resonates. I for one would like to see these triplet expanded upon, if you are so inclined. Nice work, Vera.
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