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On West Third North

by Leonard M Hawkes

Near Donkey Tree--
Hirschi's Swamp,
The eastern fringe,
The White Dead Poplar
To the north--
Mid-field and naked
Souled, we met the God:

Ah, Apollo's
Early seduction:
Golden glistening blades
Slicing through hollows
Of eastern hills,
Penetrating our wanton hearts
In midsummer's ritual;

Lost in morning's
Visionary sacrifice,
Feet bare
On holy ground:
A glorious glittering
Dewy ablution
Transcending Youth.

01/21/2004

Author's Note: A memory of "the fields"

Posted on 01/22/2004
Copyright © 2024 Leonard M Hawkes

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mainon A Schwartz on 01/26/04 at 12:29 AM

I'm not sure about the necessity of the parentheses in the first stanza; but I love the second stanza, and the overall zen-like feel of the poem. Nice perspective.

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