| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/21/04 at 05:52 AM Very good but sad love poem Kate....Charlie |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/21/04 at 01:51 PM Its sad but I can see hopes despite the hopelessness..'I still search for the sun today As I look for you'. The association of the love with the happiness is so distinct here. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/22/04 at 02:14 PM Ah the wonderings of the heart over past events, sometimes so sad... beautifully expressed here my dear. |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 01/22/04 at 05:44 PM Gorgeous imagery. A 'true' poem you have crafted here. I enjoyed reading this very much. So much sound, color, and emotion, this poem is alive. |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 01/23/04 at 09:44 AM Very touching and well written =) |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/23/04 at 03:54 PM the irony of the mocking bird not wasted on me, that is a very strong closing, Kate. Searching toward the past dream is painful, but above the mocking bird and the dream, is a glorious sky with hope for tomorrow, you just have to be patient and see it, when you turn your eyes the right way. wonderful work |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/23/04 at 07:22 PM although a little sad...sounds like good memories are lingering. It's good to look back sometimes as we move on :) |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/23/04 at 09:17 PM Simple and beautiful...which combines to make it elegantly powerful poetry, Kate |
