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Ode to the Snack Pack
by Rula ShinSweet Love
Luscious strawberry
Whipped light
pure air
He glides over to the fridge
And I know what he wants
A strawberry snack pack
I bought four packs yesterday honey!
Strawberry fluff
Dripping down
My heart smiles
A fragrance of
Strawberry lingers
My sweet love
01/20/2004 Author's Note: My husband loves his strawberry Snack Packs...I'm in love
Posted on 01/21/2004
Copyright © 2025 Rula Shin
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 01/21/04 at 01:48 AM Sounds delish, may have to raid your fridge! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/21/04 at 02:58 AM Its the sweet association. And this will survive. Because associations can never die. Not even in the dreams. A sweet association with a sweet person. Beautiful. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 01/25/04 at 01:40 AM i'm sensing a wonderfully light undertone here. This can be properly described by the word "yummy" :) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/18/04 at 04:48 AM Tasty poem, Rula. Whether it's a snack or love, strawberries top it off like no other. Those little gems are even heart shaped. Gotta love it!
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 04/23/04 at 07:14 PM I like how you relate food and romantic love, because they're a great combination! :) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/16/04 at 02:36 AM Your poem is the berries. ~(8^D)=(....Charlie |
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