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Sometimes Ya' Just Gotta Give

by Howard F Farewell

      falling out of a black starlight lullabye
shuddering under the weight of a longing for
    accept(D E P TH)ance
no more tonight baby
         your breath just cant keep me

01/15/2004

Posted on 01/15/2004
Copyright © 2024 Howard F Farewell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 01/15/04 at 09:09 AM

Wow... just wow.

Posted by Christina Gleason on 01/15/04 at 03:12 PM

nice, howard. really good resolution. ::thumbs up::

Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 01/25/04 at 08:23 AM

I know I already commented, but I wanted to let you know that I keep coming back to this and sending it to everyone I know. This really is awesome. <3

Posted by Agnes Eva on 02/28/04 at 01:51 AM

yeah, that is so dreamy and breathlessly beautiful. well worded.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/18/04 at 05:38 AM

and what was that, on her breath... breathless inquiring minds want to know... congrats on POTD... blessings...

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