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the lake

by Richard Trotter

I saw a shiny polished floor
And imagined it was a lake
By which I walked with her
On an eerie summers day.
In silence we strolled
under the yellow sky
Until I recalled, her indifference
and felt the dull ache of truth

01/11/2004

Author's Note: leeds university experiences..

Posted on 01/11/2004
Copyright © 2020 Richard Trotter

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Stephanie Kent on 01/11/04 at 01:49 AM

I love the bittersweet, nostalgic feel of this. . .

Posted by Leandra K Brossard on 01/13/04 at 05:20 AM

Mmmm... I like this.. The minor fantasies of the romantic mind, but sadly broken by the intrusion of reality...

Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 09/07/04 at 05:58 PM

Timeless unrequited love. Romantic and beautifully written still.

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