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You make me smile (and that's it)
by Barbara GriffithYou're so beautiful,
it
makes me speechless.
You're so perfect,
I
forget what to say.
You're so beyond me,
I
stopped trying to reach you. 01/09/2004 Posted on 01/09/2004
Copyright © 2024 Barbara Griffith
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 01/10/04 at 12:46 AM Whoa. I love it. The ending felt like *slap, SLAP*. Awesome. |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 01/10/04 at 02:11 AM Very nice...it's very punchy, says exactly what it needs to. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/12/04 at 03:48 PM What is determines what should be. assertive and to the point. |
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