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Betraying Kiss

by Jared Winkler

A kiss you want so bad
you turn down several times
but then can't resist
as the world shatters

I have yet to feel the cuts

01/09/2004

Posted on 01/09/2004
Copyright © 2024 Jared Winkler

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Barbara Griffith on 05/27/05 at 05:49 AM

I like the implied results from said kiss. You say it without saying it (sure, common technique, but hey, common for a reason!) and it works wonderfully.

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