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to me~ wherever i am

by Kimberly Bare

what foolishness am i
to believe that i could fly
and leave my fears behind me as i
climb

i used to live for interaction
the give and take was satisfaction
now i seek for solitude against the
tide

an ever growing desolation
creates a fascination
and my fears fall freely from a darkened
sky

i know not my own delusions
struck with sheer confusion
now i shy from the fierceness of my
mind

01/08/2004

Author's Note: i feel lost...

Posted on 01/08/2004
Copyright © 2024 Kimberly Bare

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 01/09/04 at 03:00 PM

i totally agree with aiko, the flow is lovely...beautiful poem

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/12/04 at 03:56 PM

Lack of positive impressions does cause a state when one starts feeling lonely in the crowd. Any quality impression will bring the necessary change in the mood.

Posted by J. P. Davies on 01/13/04 at 12:49 AM

The journey to find oneself may be the most treacherous and challenging of all.

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