| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jessica Yen on 01/07/04 at 07:34 AM *smiles* that last line wasn't what i was expecting :) a nice surprise. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 01/07/04 at 08:15 AM *claps!* Great ending. :D *stamps approval* |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 01/07/04 at 04:29 PM What a story that must be! So very enjoyable. |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 01/07/04 at 06:15 PM hehe, bravo for a nice twist |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/08/04 at 05:14 PM A subtle minimal. Full of wit. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/08/04 at 07:32 PM obviously not only the day ;) Another enjoyable one :)great |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 01/09/04 at 07:33 AM Hey, I forgot about that scene in "The Sandlot" reminds me of it too. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 01/10/04 at 03:16 AM love the author's note ;) |
