08. the romantic

by Jason Wardell

i wake suddenly
her lips gently touching mine
lifeguard saves the day


Author's Note: true story.

Posted on 01/07/2004
Copyright © 2022 Jason Wardell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jessica Yen on 01/07/04 at 07:34 AM

*smiles* that last line wasn't what i was expecting :) a nice surprise.

Posted by Don Coffman on 01/07/04 at 08:15 AM

*claps!* Great ending. :D *stamps approval*

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 01/07/04 at 04:29 PM

What a story that must be! So very enjoyable.

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 01/07/04 at 06:15 PM

hehe, bravo for a nice twist

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/08/04 at 05:14 PM

A subtle minimal. Full of wit.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/08/04 at 07:32 PM

obviously not only the day ;) Another enjoyable one :)great

Posted by J. P. Davies on 01/09/04 at 07:33 AM

Hey, I forgot about that scene in "The Sandlot" reminds me of it too.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 01/10/04 at 03:16 AM

love the author's note ;)

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