i told you no by Kalikala Smith so it was sick hovering, and deep and porous, and i was sick laying, and sink sinking. cold floor covering, and slate receeding, and breathing heavy and heart beating. "leave me alone," she cries, because she is detached from reality. light lighting, dim surface blurring, crawling across the floor, and safety returning. brimless, brought this, bribing for comfort, broken, brazen, buying time with sobs. silent motioning, still this being, surfacing, breaking through to thoughts, "die." 01/05/2004 Author's Note: a haunting experience i had... still not sure how to make it any form of reality... Posted on 01/06/2004 Copyright © 2025 Kalikala Smith Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Matt Forget on 01/06/04 at 06:14 AM Woah...reminds me of Poe....hehe...Poet and know it...I have scary reality checks every once and a while...I think I know what you're talkin about...nice work :) Posted by John Harder on 01/07/04 at 07:55 AM could be interperated as a spiritual battle. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)