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Site Under Construction by Bruce W Niedt
My second premolar, lower right quadrant,
marked for demolition later this month,
decides to collapse ahead of schedule,
throwing off my Saturday routine
like uncentered clay on a potters wheel.
The whole back half is gone,
the lingual, the dentist would say,
the result of biting a chocolate-covered nut.
There was decay already; it was as derelict
as the shell of an old city high-rise,
and now that Ive put in my frantic call
to my dentists answering machine, I wait.
There is no pain, but my tongue
runs itself over the ragged, sharp edge
of enamel, like a curous pedestrian
peeking over the fence at the ruins.
The dentist opens the office just for me,
and working solo, inserts a temporary crown.
I am relieved, at least for now, and gingerly
avoid crunchy foods for a while, especially
chocolate-covered nuts. My tongue, however,
still nervous, rubs over the new construction,
over and over,
wondering about this plastic impostor. 01/05/2004 Posted on 01/05/2004 Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/06/04 at 01:10 AM I love how you have taken this part of what could be an ordinary day and compared it to the city scape and new and old construction...brilliant writing and I rate this a "toothy grin"! |
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