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Navy Pier
by Amanda J CobbWhiling away productive hours,
the precious dollars,
in the nooks of Navy Pier.
First full day in the big city,
feet find no pity
as they wander Navy Pier.
Knowing it wasn't a day well-spent,
still somehow content
as I wait in Navy Pier.
Waiting to feel the connection,
waiting to see him,
and I smile in Navy Pier. 01/02/2004 Author's Note: For Shawn. Thanks for a great time in Chicago.
On another note, this is a weird experimentation in rhyme and meter.
Posted on 01/05/2004
Copyright © 2024 Amanda J Cobb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/05/04 at 11:03 PM Lovely images with a great rhyme that tends to flow right from the screen and into the heart. |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 01/06/04 at 02:51 PM Very nice and touching work. It expresses a common experience to us all. Nice work -bf |
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