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Bring your VISA

by Deborah S Regan

don't let anything stop you..
the world is yours...
just bring some plastic

featuring a no-extra charge grin
inside a glowing jack-0-skyscraper
say "hello" to a glowing experience

you deserve the luxury of technology
buzzing and humming inside a box
waiting for you at the
end of a steaming afternoon

01/02/2004

Author's Note: I just wrote this.

Posted on 01/03/2004
Copyright © 2024 Deborah S Regan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 01/03/04 at 04:52 AM

i'm with gabriel on this one....remember the old commercials -- "and don't forget your visa card. " LOL. this is how i got into debt in my early twenties, with the allure you describe here. a very timely read, since the credit card bills haven't come yet.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/05/04 at 03:56 AM

Yes, technological evolution has created this illusion that we have really evolved. Evolved into a mechanical kind of beings with approach so material and so casual, machine like.

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