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what you've done in YOUR past, affects ME now

by Nanette Bellman

it seems unclear, almost funny
@ the same time
it makes perfect sense

young and stupid
like Malibu and Coke
but i've never been around the block
yet you own it

do you know how it feels to know
that i feel like
there is nothing sacred with us
with me

i just want to have a something

don't think what you're thinking
this isn't about her
infact, i never wanted to say "her"
but it happend...(i'm sorry...)

this is about in general

because you know so much
even about life
i haven't the slightest clue
and you wonder why i call myself "little"

it's about bruises and scars
laughs and tears
it's about being 23
and popular and a football player
(because you were a starter)

your best friends
those enemies
parties
and kisses
but
this is still not about her

this is about me.

12/29/2003

Posted on 01/02/2004
Copyright © 2024 Nanette Bellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/12/04 at 05:34 PM

I liked this conversational style. And yes, past is the cause of the present. And it does cause the effect when there's an association.

Posted by Megan Langley on 07/30/08 at 04:57 AM

i enjoyed this one... nicely done :)

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