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Cocktails

by Sam Roberts


As the grey mist descends over this secluded valley
I look out of my window and sigh.
too many mornings have been shaped this way,
And the people stand in it, motionless,
Frozen - and stuck to the asphalt.

My only friend is nature, a fantasy of mine created by sleep deprivation.
my face is colourless and my anaemia is getting increasingly worse,
I look and feel disgusting.
it's nauseating to even look at my body.
My stomach is a furrow and I am empty


It’s a town numb and wordless
from husbands and wives,
a cocktail of deformed children, urinated on in disgust
It disgusts me, this concoction of neglect


My hands are old and wrinkled.
I am ageing and breathless but still smoking,
I am revoltingly thin and tired but still awake, some how.

And this mist of grey is not just the weather turning on me,
it’s just me - and how I'm feeling.

01/01/2004

Posted on 01/01/2004
Copyright © 2024 Sam Roberts

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jane E Pearce on 01/01/04 at 08:15 PM

Wonderful comparison in this. Enjoyed it.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/03/04 at 08:10 PM

The images in this are stunning in their ability to create strong emotion. There is a forlorn frustrated feel to this that penetrates deep.

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 10/23/04 at 09:04 PM

i feel such a strong relation to this! so well put into words! ~mlp

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