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Target Practice

by Jon-Jacob F Deal

Muffled through earplugs
The supersonic death-song
Whistling like a scythe

12/31/2003

Author's Note: Happiness is an M4 carbine and a full magazine.

Posted on 12/31/2003
Copyright © 2024 Jon-Jacob F Deal

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/03/04 at 02:47 PM

wow...what a haiku!

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/18/04 at 02:38 AM

Interesting analogy here, haiku well done.

Posted by Carl Walker on 04/22/04 at 11:26 AM

this conveys a sense of power, wonderful use of haiku

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