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"Come On Paul" (Lim-Acrostic Challenge)

by Cathlyn Cartier

Can’t you do better than that?
Or are you just talking through your hat?
Making rhythm and rhyme on
Everyone’s time
Only this time your efforts fell flat
Now when your wit has recovered
Please submit something that we can discover
And let it be refreshingly brisk
Unless you fear taking the risk of
Losing a challenge as simple as this "lover".

12/30/2003

Author's Note: Response to Paul Solomon's "Acrostic-Limerick 1"

Posted on 12/31/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cathlyn Cartier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/02/04 at 07:05 PM

lololol... thank you for a very clever chuckle!!

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 01/28/04 at 04:42 AM

Wow, two forms in one! You go!

Posted by Mo Couts on 06/05/11 at 03:11 AM

Hehe, this is awesome! =)

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