parallel universe by Richard Trotter he wakes in your arms, alive at the touch of pale skin instead of just words. 12/22/2003 Author's Note: haiku form Posted on 12/22/2003 Copyright © 2025 Richard Trotter Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Kimberly Bare on 12/22/03 at 02:31 PM very moving piece...i especially like the title Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 12/22/03 at 11:02 PM I like the final line, its adds a real interesting touch to it Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 12/24/03 at 08:45 AM Now that's the right way to wake up! Great poem, Richard. Return to the Previous Page     pathetic.org FAQ Members Poetry Center Login Signup   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)