parallel universe by Richard Trotter he wakes in your arms, alive at the touch of pale skin instead of just words. 12/22/2003 Author's Note: haiku form Posted on 12/22/2003 Copyright © 2024 Richard Trotter Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Kimberly Bare on 12/22/03 at 02:31 PM very moving piece...i especially like the title Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 12/22/03 at 11:02 PM I like the final line, its adds a real interesting touch to it Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 12/24/03 at 08:45 AM Now that's the right way to wake up! Great poem, Richard. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)