daybreak lays upon the fringes of night pushing persistently with a pierce of light the cruelity of darkness softened by the sun birdsong announces another hopeful day begun great glimpses of divinity grace the scenic way 'till night lays upon the fringes of day
12/21/2003
Natural and beautiful images that spread from your rhyme and into the reader's spirit. Great read.
i love this... brilliant and mesmerizing form... gentle images lace my mind... blessings...