| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/19/03 at 11:06 PM most beautiful |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/19/03 at 11:06 PM mmm, spirituality and sensuality going hand in hand... |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 12/20/03 at 12:47 AM to me this had spoke the words and the dreamy essence of a dream...coming to terms with your feminine side ehh Max? ;) |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 12/20/03 at 04:39 AM god, do i know this feeling. i know these things, from one human soul to another. god, the beauty, it bleeds, and i, with it. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 12/20/03 at 07:19 AM Hi Max,
The Goddess, it's dreamy, beautiful. Good one. Looks like another hit with everyone. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 12/20/03 at 10:22 PM Ah Max... what an incredible, light-filled picture! Beautiful! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/21/03 at 02:38 AM oh the power and awe that meet with us when we meet with love/lover. I love the part about her hair (my hair is the only thing I consider divine about me because it doesn't change) and there is something about hair that IS divine, how it holds energy and the essence of experiences. Beautiful!!! |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 12/21/03 at 08:11 AM A beautiful view of life and the ever turning Wheel. Max, this is truly wonderful. |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 12/21/03 at 03:40 PM the quote you start with sets the whole amazing mood for the piece...it was like a dream, softly whispered to a listening ear. |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 12/21/03 at 06:16 PM quite surreal with beautiful imagery, I especially like the last stanza and the last few lines of the first (all of it basically hehe).
xx |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/22/03 at 01:52 AM One view of "spirituality" ! Proverbs gives quite another. And Song of Solomon now there is a real challenge. But hope is there. The Goddess is a poem of youth and vigor, not meant for the old and dying. Let me have a spirituality that lives beyond the grave! Thought provoking poem, Max. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/23/03 at 11:55 PM Excellent Max, excellent....Charlie |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/24/03 at 09:09 AM ah, the cycle of life... the god is reborn... lives and couples with the goddess and dies... then he is reborn again... beautiful and intriguing insight to this most magickal rite... thank you, max... blessings... |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/25/03 at 01:07 AM my god max, it's absolutely, deliciously beautiful...i love the way you can go from a political poem to a lovely sensuous piece...variety is the spice... |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 03/09/04 at 04:33 AM Absolutely beautiful. Thanks for sharing this piece. :)Kat |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 07/30/04 at 12:18 AM And as your Coffee Goddess, well, I have to say, Two and a Grande Mocha's! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/28/05 at 05:11 PM have to comment once again and say congrats on POTD...the imagery in this leaves you breathless to say the least...you are a beautiful poet.. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 03/28/05 at 05:46 PM
i voted on this poem ages ago, but never commented. i remember it well.
She combs her curls,
plucks my dreams from the brush
and weaves them with the
fabric of the universe......beautiful, max. congrats on POTD. well deserved! |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 03/28/05 at 09:13 PM beautiful metaphor- i love the dreamcatchers line. I didn't expect it to repeat, but there it was..lovely picture painted about her pulling your dreams from the brush- I could see it. nice, melanie. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 03/29/05 at 04:28 AM nice to see this poem get the acclaimation it deserves, Br Max. Congrats on POTD... |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 03/29/05 at 05:53 AM Now how did I miss this one? Lovely, lovely, I will smile myself to sleep dreaming like this. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/29/05 at 07:06 AM Congratulations for poem of the day with you love play Max....Charlie |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 07/24/06 at 12:42 PM You make me want to be like this....as if...
wonderful |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 03/24/09 at 05:00 PM most beautiful poem |
